liFeLeSs Without yOu

[jennifer sung]

tears flow down like downpour rain
silence prevails deep within my heart
your words resuond in my mind
'we'll always be together and never be apart'

i look at thee with empty eyes
the eyes which once full of dreams
dreams of lovely moments spent with u
but now just tears with endless realms

i still remeber ur naughty glance
ur hazel eyesur precious smile
it seems as if it happened yesterday
wen we walked hand in hand for miles

the wind blows cold the winds of pain
my hair blows across my face and sway
i wish to feel the brush of ur hands
over my cheeks to put it away

but alas all my wishes wishes are in ruins
all my efforts in nthng but vain
however hard i try watever i may do
you cn nvr be with me again

for rains may come n droughts may quench
my thirst for your love will never lave
candles burnt away n flowers dried
as i walk apart wawy from ur grave.



its something i wrote months back.thought its not and ideal piece of poetry,i find it one of my best pieces so far.

[jennifer sung]

thnk u

[abhinav]

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[KOMAL]

very touchy

[sweet angel]

its a lovely poem.. reminds me of sum1. :( gud wrk, keep it up..!!

[chhaya]

its really very touchy....
keep it up jenni !!!!!!

[Dr Dolly]

:-) .. my pleasure !

[jennifer sung]

thnks dr dolly

[Dr Dolly]

Its indeed beautiful ! ... The pain came across to me !
Keep writing dear ! :-)

[jennifer sung]

thnks a tonne

[Divya]

great ! den u realli have the ability to put yrself in sm1 else' shooes .. and no wonder u wanna b a writer..(just read yr previous blog..)
Good Luck swty..